Silent Hook

talking about his novel Shark, Will Self explained that he set out to write Jaws without the shark. i am not entirely sure what he was getting at, but when i read the book i sort of understood his purpose: to have his narrative, a character’s past circumstances developed & swivel around something articulated, but never spoken. here is my little aside to that idea, but more abstract so that what is swivelled around, the dumbstruckedness of seeing whatever is seen that causes dumbstruckedness, whatever that may have been is far even from being hinted at. i don’t know if this just makes sense in my head but is actually a total load of crap.

 

Silent Hook

Captain Hook was too fixated on the crocodile.
His real fixation was with utter obedience to the whim of time
against his will, conscious or otherwise;
while brats -like mosquitoes- paused in age,
tormented him & his crew
: a tragic figure with nowt to brag about
except his fashionable wardrobe, a pearl in his ear,
a well regimented galleon, spick n’ span & swift.

So that when i saw it,
against my impulse,
without cause
– the workforce of the heart,
stevedores of the mind,
stopped what they were doing;
production muted.

Most noticeable was the gawped ㅇ of the mouth,
long, dry ㅈ of the throat, which colludes
with a ㅁ to form audible signs
: it must be said, i was silent.

What else must then be noted
is that what i saw: it,
silenced not only me
but the clockwork demarcation
that is the habit of form in motion
: nothing whatsoever moved in it.
It must be said, all was silent.

6 Comments Add yours

  1. Cool, I love this new look, it is so beautiful and professional!

    I sent you a email commenting on the excellent poems you sent me, check your inbox and let me know what you think.

    1. i get fidgety with the look & feel an urge to change sometimes.

      1. You struck gold this time, it feels like you run a large advertising agency.

  2. Daniel, have a look at this blog:
    https://aquileana.wordpress.com
    It shows that the old classics are still popular, I feel you should give some of your older poems (i.e. terza rima) a blog post, it doesn’t hurt to share. All her posts deal with classical myths and have hundreds of likes.

    1. i’ll think about it. thanks for the recommendation looks interesting.

      1. Just remember, I personally feel that there is no old and no new. What is common will become old, and what is rare will be resurrected as new. It’s a cycle. Nothing new under the sun.

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